Saturday, February 20, 2010

"What's the Matter with Kids Today?" (Amy Goldwasser)

By: Jazmin & Kayla

Within the reading “What’s the Matter with Kids Today,” by Amy Goldwasser she comes across the topic of computers, cell phones/text messaging, iPods, and instant messaging and how they affect young teenagers. Her main point is that even though computers and electronics can be used for good things such as learning about history, they are more likely used to lead teenagers in abusing them by being obsessed with online chat and becoming more into a second self. We also feel that Goldwasser thinks highly of the doors the internet has opened to teenagers. She says “We need to start trusting our kids to communicate as they will online…”(239) and “Once we stop regarding the internet as a villain, stop presenting it as the enemy of history and literature and worldly knowledge, then our teenagers have the potential to become the next great voices of America.” (240)
Four major points supporting the thesis
1. “We’re talking about 33 million Americans who are fluent in texting, e-mailing, blogging, IM’ing, and constantly amending their profile on social network site” (PG. 237).
2. Teens now enjoy reading and writing more than before because it is less familiar to them and something different then being on a computer.
3. “Had a parent introduced 20 minutes of researching the Holocaust to one month of their teen’s internet life, or a teacher assigned The Diary of Anne Frank (arguably a 13-year-old girl’s blog)-if we worked with, rather than against, the way this generation voluntarily takes in information-we might not be able to pick up the phone and expose tragic pockets of ignorance” (PG. 239).
4. “The average teen chooses to spend an average of 16.7 hours a week reading and writing online” (239).
We believe that Amy Goldwasser would have to agree with Sherry Turkle in the reading “Can You Hear Me Now?” This reading goes on about how we are all connected through cell phones and blackberries and how no one thinks that connecting through physical appearance is good anymore. Sherry’s idea goes directly off of Amy in how we are all connected through technology and have become a second self. Along with Steven Johnson, author of “Watching TV Makes You Smarter,” in how Johnson explains that many new televisions shows are actually “enhancing our cognitive faculties, not dumbing them down.” (215) I think that both authors believe that technology such as the internet and television has promoted a new learning style in teenagers and young adults.

8 comments:

  1. I like how you numbered and directly quoted the four main points in the article. However, I think it would be more effective to the reader if you put an explanation below the quote. Although I realize I did not do that in my assignment either and was not a requirement to explain it, but now that I am reading what others wrote I think it would be better to have a brief explanation.

    The two readings you picked to respond to were excellent choices. Even though Johnson did not talk about electronic media other than television, you still applied it well in your response. Excellent work!

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  2. I think you guys did a really good job. I like that you have lots of quotes and that after the quotes you are able to explain what the quotes mean to you in your own words. That’s helps the reader because then we know that you know what your talking about, if that makes sense. I’m so glad that when I was in middle school there were no cell phones, because now-a-days like you said kids use them for abuse. Imagine how bad gossiping has gotten since the invention of the cell phone, with one little button you can start a rumor in a second.


    -Brooke Ranum

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  4. “We believe that Amy Goldwasser would have to agree with Sherry Turkle in the reading “Can You Hear Me Now?” This reading goes on about how we are all connected through cell phones and blackberries and how no one thinks that connecting through physical appearance is good anymore.” I used this quote because my part was on Sherry Turkle Can you Hear Me Now? I took something completely different from her I felt Turkle was trying to say that technology is becoming a nuisance because people don’t talk face to face any more, while I felt that Goldwasser felt that technology was a good thing if we insisted on our children using the internet, especially to research things, and not just for another way to chat with our friends.

    Jody

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  5. I really liked reading your work. It was really to the point of what you took from the author's writing. I think both Sherry Turkle and Amy Goldwasser did bring into their points that people today are more insistent on technology rather then face to face communicating. Sherry Turkle was pointing out that it is good to have young people focus on what they want to, such as using technology to study and communicate. In Amy Goldwasser's writing she really stressed the way technology can isolate people. Indeed they had a similar view on technology being more prominent today, but they also have differing views on the way technology interact with our lives.

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  6. I really enjoyed reading your post. I thought you did a great job of summarizing the author's writing and you did a great job mixing in the arguments of Sherry Turkle and Amy Goldwasser. I also enjoyed the numbered statisitcs. They did a great job of providing evidence for the argument and it was to the point. I would have to agree with the argument that technology can be a good thing for people if we use it the correct way. I also agree though that technology makes it easier for things to quickly get out of hand.

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  7. The group did a wonderful job on this post. I also like the way you numbered the points your were making. I guess being I'm a bit older,I still see face to face and a vital part of communicating and is an important part of any relationship. Yes, communication through the web, cell phones etc. are great, but we all need that human connection that is vital for our existance. Kathy

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  8. Dont listen to the above comments from your friends... this really was not a good article you wrote.

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